Question

Read this story, which is in chronological order.

Last May, I decided to swim a mile without stopping. I

knew I would need to be able to do it to join the Coast

Guard, so I spent every morning practicing with my father.

I thought of giving up many times, "I could be sleeping right now," I would cry out as try muscles ached.

One morning, I started to doubt myself, so I imagined swimming to a person in need. Before I knew it, I could hear my dad clapping, I had done it?

Write a version of the same story, this time starting the story in the middle