Writing with the “You-Attitude”

Revise each of the following sentences to the “you-attitude” that places placing the recipient's needs, purposes, or interests first.

Original sentence

Revision to “you-attitude”

I have arranged to have the equipment you need in the Philadelphia office on Tuesday.

We will reimburse you in full for the expenses that have resulted from this error.

We can give you an appointment next Monday.

I will complete the report you asked for by Friday.

We promise that our guests will have an exciting time at Wally World.

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Writing with the “You-Attitude”

Revise each of the following sentences to the “you-attitude” that places placing the recipient's needs, purposes, or interests first.

Original sentence

Revision to “you-attitude”

I have arranged to have the equipment you need in the Philadelphia office on Tuesday.

We will reimburse you in full for the expenses that have resulted from this error.

We can give you an appointment next Monday.

I will complete the report you asked for by Friday.

We promise that our guests will have an exciting time at Wally World.

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Original sentence	Revision to “you-attitude”
I have arranged to have the equipment you need in the Philadelphia office on Tuesday.
We will reimburse you in full for the expenses that have resulted from this error.
We can give you an appointment next Monday.
I will complete the report you asked for by Friday.
We promise that our guests will have an exciting time at Wally World.