This is the discussion and conclusion of my scientific posterpresentation please proofread it grammatically and scientificallyand give me any suggestions you have! Thanks.

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The thrill factors involved in designing thrilling rideseffectively offer the rider different environments, amazingsensations and crazy experiences.

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This is the introduction of my scientific poster presentationplease proofread it grammatically and scientifically and give meany suggestions you have! Thanks.

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Have you ever thought about why would thrillingrides get you excited, make your heart racing oreven make you start screaming from the depths of your core, forminga bead of sweat on your forehead?

Well, the answer lies in physics. These rides demonstrateparticularly good examples of the physics laws and conceptsinvolved in nature and their effect on us in real-lifeapplications.

Height, weightlessness, high velocity, huge acceleration,centripetal force, impulse and the momentary change in momentum,the work being done and the change in energy, are all factorsthat contribute in making a thrilling ride an exciting one. Thosefactors cause adrenalin rush which leads to a higher bloodpressure thus stimulating the heart. They also put the riderin a lot of uncertainty and unexpected visual cues.

An example of a thrilling ride is the Giant Drop which isa free-fall ride involving the drawing of an eight seat carriage bya cable to the top of the tower. After one minute full of anxiety,the riders are plummeted down a height of 39 stories (almost 115m)then brought to rest within meters from the ground by asophisticated magnetic braking system.

Hi this is the introduction that I have written for my poster. Myposter is on the following URL (please have a look!).

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Please correct the introduction for any scientific or grammaticalerrors and give me your suggestions about this section as well asthe overall poster. Thanks

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Have you ever thought about why would thrilling rides getyou excited, make your heart racing orsometimes even make you start screaming from the depths of yourcore, forming a bead of sweat on your forehead?

Well, the answer lies in physics. These rides demonstratevery good examples of the physics laws and concepts involved innature and their affect on us in real life applications.

Height, weightlessness, high velocity, hugeacceleration, the sudden impulse and themomentary change in momentum, the work being done and the suddenchange in energy are all factors that contribute inmaking a thrilling ride an exciting one. Those factorsmake adrenalin concentrations in our body system increasecausing higher blood pressure thus stimulating theheart.. They also make the rider in a lot ofuncertainty and unexpected visual cues.

An example of a thrilling ride is the Giant Drop which isa freefall ride involving the drawing of an eight seat carriage bytwin cables to the top of the tower. After one minute full ofanxiety, the riders are plummeted down a height of 39 stories(almost 115m) then brought to a halt within meters from the groundby a sophisticated magnetic braking system.

Poster on this URL: http://i55.tinypic.com/e0g0w5.jpg

This is a poster that I have designed talking about what makes agood theme park ride a good one in terms of physics. Please reviewEvery section of it and proofread it and tell what are the thingsmy poster is lacking either visually or in text to make it Astandard. Please take this seriously as this very importantpresentation for me. Thank you and I highly appreciate your help!

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