Writing 2121F/G Lecture Notes - Lecture 8: Burping, Infinitive, Denotation
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Write with emphasis, find the right words, write to be inclusive. We see connections when words/phrases look or sound the same. Balanced: the air is dirtied by factories belching smoke and cars spewing exhaust. Unbalanced: the flight was successful because the pilot was fit, he flew a straight course, and keeping aircraft near the surface was important. Balanced: the flight was successful because the pilot was fit, he flew a straight course, and he kept the aircraft near the surface. Coordinating conjunction: i eat easter candy and i throw up. Subordinating conjunction: until, whenever, although, i eat halloween candy until i throw up. Correlative conjunction co-relate (two parts rather than one: either i stop eating candy or i will throw up, not only/but also, neither/nor, either/or, both/and. The man shrinks and he is getting smaller every day: unbalanced. The man shrinks and gets smaller every day: balanced.