HTH 503 Lecture Notes - Lecture 2: Functional Programming, List Of Fables Characters, Amc Amitron

• School: Ryerson University
• Department: Hospitality and Tourism Management
• Course: HTH 503
• Professor: adam

Document Summary

Chapter 4: page 139-142: using specific and functional language. Revise the following sentences by replacing vague words and abstract nouns with purposeful, concrete details: based on vanessa"s reviews, she"s a good employee, 5 of the organizations sales associates are young. It was a clerk from accounting who located the spreadsheets that had been missing: revise: the accounting clerk located the missing spreadsheets. > we successfully received your recent request refund of the new purchase price of your new xj copier: we are so sorry that we won"t be repairing your poorly functioning air conditioner system. >we apologize, as we wont be able to repair your ac system: thank you for contacting amitron about a marketing position. I receive hundreds of applications from qualify college graduates just like you. > we are not able to extend credit at the moment but you may fill your order on a cash basis: we cannot wave a service charge on chequing account.